Friday 20 January 2012

Ice Skating

So here is the promised once every two day poem post ^^ This one is dedicated to my friend Samuel tsai since he gave me the topic of todays ice skating outing for this poem ><. It not rly written well... but enjoy ^^


The time has come to show our fail skills
In a place that gives you the chills
To acacia ridge we go
A place that is 0 degrees or below

With skates that hurt our feet  to the brink
We take off into the ice rink
We try to skate but sadly fail
Even though we were holding onto the rail

Once we thought we were ready to let go
To be able to skate, to go with the flow
But as soon as we do we fall to the ground
We fall to floor with a big as pound

With our butts hurting and pants all wet
We get off the ground feeling upset
But we didn't give up, we kept on going
Swearing as much as the wind was blowing

Just when we got the hang of it
It was time to go, it was time to quit
So we went off and stood their waiting
Cuz for CAS we are claiming ice Skating 

Andy xD

p.s. the last two line you wun get unless you do the IB or know someone who does the IB.

2 comments:

  1. LIKE LIKE LIKE LIKE LIKE (Y) OMG THAT IS SUCH AN AWESOME POEM! I LIKE IT A LOT, IT MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD BECAUSE IT WAS SO TRUEEE (Y) :D

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    1. Lol glad u liked it xD it was dedicated to you since u gave me the topic ><

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